This essay demonstrates real progress in your writing. Its strengths are that it is very well constructed – you organise your ideas very well, and provide clear markers to your reader to explain your ideas and the relationship between them. You dealt evenly with both texts, you made insightful points and you supported many of your ideas with specific quotations from the texts

To develop your work further, you will want to:

  1. Explore the language of the texts you’re examining
  2. Make a wider range of links between the two texts – what are the women expressing? Why do they express themselves the way they do?
  3. Expand your analysis to include a wider range of points and ensure that you support EVERY point with a quotation.

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